Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 22, 2010



Suggestions made at critique:
Add an inch to the right side
Add clutter
Remove the lantern
Drop the curtain to hide more
Remove the coat
All items should be taxidermy-related
maybe add an urn?? <--but they were talking about the murderer's mom? who doesn't really have anything to do with the story at all. SO. chose not to do that.