Definitely an unfortunate invention. I can't decide whether I want her to look more annoyed or whether her "oh well" expression is perfect. Anyway, it's totally clear.
The character looks gloomy, also lost if she should looked either gloomy or ticked that it's not working,great use of blacks,whites and grays,minus what everyone said I think maybe making her more drenched would make it more effective- Henry
I like the image and the feel it has to it with the dark background and the girls expression as she's looking up. Yea I agree that you do need to make visible rain because it's unclear that it raining, and it would help if you also made her clothes and hair yet from it.
nice...I like the mood a lot. I actually don't think it is necessary to add a background, since we are just highlighting the invention. I think the character could look a little more wet.
Yep, pretty much what everyone else said. I would make her more drenched, and make it clearer that it's raining. Also, if she was more drenched, I would give her a really annoyed expression, like a "How did I ever think this would be useful," but that's all up to you. Nice work!
lol I love this idea! The tones working great,and the detail work in the umbrella is perfect. I'm not sure how I feel about her expression, but I would like to see her clouths and hair more visably wet. Over all I think it fits the assignment perfectly.
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if the umbrella was more hip-looking, like made of fish net tights, then there would be more of a reason behind getting wet. bc youre getting wet to look cool
She must be reject in love, I could tell. haha, I like the concept, but I don't think she should look up, maybe you can make her look upset or look down at earth.
I agree with making her appear wetter, but I think the rain looks fine. Perhaps it's just the computer screen, but regardless, rain can be really subtle real life. I don't want to see it get too overbearing. The expression is fine, too. If someone bought / put together this umbrella, obviously they aren't going to get pissed or depressed about it. The expression, to me, reads as "maybe that wasn't the best decision", as it should. I feel like if it's supposed to be netting, it should be a knitted a little tighter.
Nix the plans for a background, it's lovely and subtle as is. It might detract from the umbrella, and the background right now it makes me think of summer rain. Yum.
Definitely an unfortunate invention. I can't decide whether I want her to look more annoyed or whether her "oh well" expression is perfect. Anyway, it's totally clear.
ReplyDeletei love this! i like the subtle brush works of the rain and various tones...it's beautiful.
ReplyDeletei think her facial ecpression is ok.
it show a little hint of confusion or embarrassment... i'm not sure you should make her more annoyed...
great job! nice concept!
outside of your own alterations i cant think of anything else to do with this but recommend you check out josh's, very similar, equally hilarious.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Your toning is lovely. Yes that is a really useless invention.
ReplyDeleteI think it is pretty much all there. The idea is clear.
It might be a good idea to show the girl totally drenched, but it's not necessary.
The character looks gloomy, also lost if she should looked either gloomy or ticked that it's not working,great use of blacks,whites and grays,minus what everyone said I think maybe making her more drenched would make it more effective- Henry
ReplyDeleteI like the image and the feel it has to it with the dark background and the girls expression as she's looking up. Yea I agree that you do need to make visible rain because it's unclear that it raining, and it would help if you also made her clothes and hair yet from it.
ReplyDeletenice...I like the mood a lot. I actually don't think it is necessary to add a background, since we are just highlighting the invention. I think the character could look a little more wet.
ReplyDeleteYep, pretty much what everyone else said. I would make her more drenched, and make it clearer that it's raining. Also, if she was more drenched, I would give her a really annoyed expression, like a "How did I ever think this would be useful," but that's all up to you. Nice work!
ReplyDeletelol I love this idea! The tones working great,and the detail work in the umbrella is perfect. I'm not sure how I feel about her expression, but I would like to see her clouths and hair more visably wet. Over all I think it fits the assignment perfectly.
ReplyDeleteoh yeah, also I couldent access my old blogspot account, so I had to create a new one, this is my new correct address:
http://www.ellen-topitzer.blogspot.com/
if the umbrella was more hip-looking, like made of fish net tights, then there would be more of a reason behind getting wet. bc youre getting wet to look cool
ReplyDeleteShe must be reject in love, I could tell. haha, I like the concept, but I don't think she should look up, maybe you can make her look upset or look down at earth.
ReplyDeletei like it don't change anythiiiiiing!!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with making her appear wetter, but I think the rain looks fine. Perhaps it's just the computer screen, but regardless, rain can be really subtle real life. I don't want to see it get too overbearing. The expression is fine, too. If someone bought / put together this umbrella, obviously they aren't going to get pissed or depressed about it. The expression, to me, reads as "maybe that wasn't the best decision", as it should. I feel like if it's supposed to be netting, it should be a knitted a little tighter.
ReplyDeleteNix the plans for a background, it's lovely and subtle as is. It might detract from the umbrella, and the background right now it makes me think of summer rain. Yum.